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Ok, this is my first little series so excuse me if it sounds stupid.
(f/n)-First Name
(l/n)-Last Name
(f/c)-Favorite Color
(s/c)-Skin Color
(h/c)-Hair Color
(h/l)-Hair Length
(e/c)- Eye Color
(Insert ...)- Insert whatever it says after insert
You: 13 years old
Jeff: 14 years old
Your P.O.V
"Ok, I think I can paint a garden mural and have a pathway here" I say to myself. Just my luck that my parents got that promotion, huh. We had to move to a new house (due to the fact the company they work for was so far away) and my room was boring. Although my parents had to work out of to town on short notice,(classic business trip), they still bought paint for if I wanted to remodel. I decided to give it a little flair; a sleeping horse was more interesting than this room. As I painted (f/c) (insert favorite flowers), I heard a rustle near my window. It was open. I walked towards it, if you saw me it was obvious that that I was confused. Didn`t I close it? is what I was thinking. It was windy so it might have opened by itself. I closed the window, still confused, and turn back to the mural.
Jeff`s P.O.V
Huh, someone new in the neighborhood. Its a small family, parents and a kid. I grinned, wider than I usually did. Lucky me, I was gonna strike the house next door anyway. Might as well get a closer look, see what I`m dealing with. The builders of this house must have been idiots. There was a gate in their backyard that was connected to the woods. This should be easy. As I walked inside, I heard a car engine start and go. Did they leave? No, a light on so there must be someone in the house. There was a tree that branched over to the room so I climbed it and peeked through the window. There was a girl, probably a year younger than me, painting the wall. The girl had (h/l), (h/c) hair, vibrant (e/c) eyes, and a smile that almost made me forget about who I am. She was almost as beautiful as I am. And the mural she painted, a garden of (f/c) (insert favorite flowers), it looked so real. I crept closer and closer and I could practically open the window right now. I reached my hand out and the damn wind blew the window open. I jumped of the tree before the girl could get a look at me. I`ll go back later, right now, the next door neighbors are going to sleep early.
This is my first x reader series. It might be stupid. I would appreciate positive feedback and will try to continue the series. Enjoy!
Jeff belongs to Creepypasta
Story belongs to me
You belong to you.....*thinks of an idea for next chapter*
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RedRosehood Featured By Owner 12 hours ago  Student Traditional Artist
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it.
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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Matrixdreaden Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Burgundy Bleeding hearts
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beckyLaLax3 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Whats the next parts link?
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lilyloveshadow Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Warning! Those things aren't real, I've skipped so many of them it's not funny. Just ignore them. They're a waste waste of time.
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Wholock-lover Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Student Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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dragonficz Featured By Owner May 22, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Blue forget me nots and pink white and blue dragon Lilly's!
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djpown3 Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
purple and black roses
Sebastian Michaelis (Flowers) [V1] Red Rose in teardrop crystal vase dewless Tiny Flower Emote 
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alinaalina804 Featured By Owner May 7, 2015  Student Artist
Mine was just black roses...coinsedence, I THINK NOT! (joking)
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AnyonomusDragonHybri Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Silver orchids.... I wish they were real. I wonder what they would look like
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PieKitty Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I made me paint blue roses :3
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InSaNeGamerLuna68 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
*rereading every chapter xD* Rainbow colored roses! :D lol not, bloody red roses~ :D
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WolfOfGames Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
White iris flower with light purple in the middle.
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Black / velvet roses ;3 I'm emo/gothic like that so meh
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POWitsacat Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
Aha same your not the only one here lol
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner May 25, 2015  Student Digital Artist
X3 this was posted so long ago wow XD
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:iconpowitsacat:
POWitsacat Featured By Owner May 26, 2015
Ik lol
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner May 26, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Lol
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SUSHIFREAK101 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2014  Student
purple and orange spider lillies with dark greens at the background^^ my fav colour and flower, its good ~Dance! 
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K3nzie71 Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Red and gray Hawaiian flowers?? alright then!!
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Cupcake-eatr Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2014
As I painted lavender lavenders

Hmm... What an interesting flower
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lexifish12 Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Dark blue roses.. Hmm, interesting.
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deaththekidfan229 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*claps so fast it truns into an eco*
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a great beginning!!!~
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MarkyeStar Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
So nice...
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Am I the only one who would have done red and black sunflowers?
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Time-Of-Dying10 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
No. I was thinking of putting black and blue roses XD
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's too cool. XD
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Time-Of-Dying10 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
Hahaha thanks
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lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
nice! I had actually been thinking red and silver lilies.
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsparklyeyesplz: That would be very pretty.
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lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
x:thewave:xx I know right?  Big Fool Emoji-12 (Pervy Flirt) [V2] 
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dinorex33 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconhehplz: Right.
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lilyofthevalley1995 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014
yup. =^w^=
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
I love it so far and i made me paint black roses my fave color and fave flower 
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POWitsacat Featured By Owner May 25, 2015
O.O that's what I made myself paint... Great choice lol
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner May 28, 2015
I know right
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sassy3dcat Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
i did the same thing!!!
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
TWINSIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD
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MissUnderstood7227 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Student Artist
Lol I picked the same thing, Black Roses!!!!
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014
YAY!!!!!!!!!!
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WinLach Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I picked the same thing!
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
TWINSIES!!!! XD. I'm so weird 
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WinLach Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD I am too so no problem!
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
XD YAY!!!
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WinLach Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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Shikonozunima Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
Lol
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WinLach Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D (Big Grin) 
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ShadowDragonGhost Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
More please
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Spiritmist16 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is really really good!! You captured JEFF completely!
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flyinhawaiian33 Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Good job lol ur doing great
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